This is sad, yet interesting

Sounds like my father! Nicely written I can feel your deep and intense feelings and I like the way you have constructed this poem! Well Done Justin!

That's really really intense! I'm sorry that your dad treats you that way. As mad as it sounds, every negative that happens can always be turned into a positive. Some of us opt out and choose the easy path, but some go out and explore every part of life and embrace it.
Try and embrace life, and acceptance is the key to moving on.
Things wont always be like that for you, and one day you can start your own family and show how a real dad is supposed to be. - Learn from his mistakes!

This is a really emotional and heartfelt write, it touched me. If you're going through this i only wish you the best and hope things will turn out good again, you surely deserve it. I know it's easy for me to say not to give up since i'm not in your situation but please don't. Keep up writing.

I hvnt had so mny people compliment my work thnk u sincerly alister