Comments : There once was a girl, who's heart was breaking.

  • 12 years ago

    by NOTWORTHLIVING

    Wow tht did a number to me very inspiring to an im sorry he mislead u us guys r very dumb.

  • 12 years ago

    by NOTWORTHLIVING

    Um dnt mind the compliment i was confuzzeled but very good poem very intense emotion it left me thinking

  • 12 years ago

    by Eleanor

    Thank you very much for the feed back! How come you were confused? Maybe I can change it x

  • 12 years ago

    by Isabelle

    Beautiful poem eleanor! :)
    u do have talent for writing for sure!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ginger Ozawa

    This is nice. It speaks to me

  • 12 years ago

    by cristal

    Nice poem hun very heartfelt :) hope to see more from you

  • 12 years ago

    by LockedAway

    That was amazing...you are a great writer from what i can tell keep it up

  • VERY WELL DONE :) INSPIRES ME :) KEEP IT UP :)