Very nice theme
Very nice rhyming scheme
Very nice wording

Not so nice rhythm (flow)
Some lines were way too long in words when compared to their rhyming counterpart.

You made it work somewhow though

Overall nice poem

Hey Alexa. Nice work here. You did an excellent job. I agree with David about the rhyming scheme, theme and wording. Keep up the good work.
Kristina

Yes, rhythm and rhyming are new to me, so they aren't as good as I want them to be. But thanks a lot for commenting and I'll be sure to try hard on my weaknesses next time (=

Very good work! And you should get 5/5 for that theme itself. I don't know why you have messed up the rhythm in between.. If you ignore that....It is an amazing work! ***** :)