This is beautiful Jazzii. wonderfully written, the rhymes are amazing, and the ending is best part and is my favorite. :D

This is beautiful Jazzii. wonderfully written, the rhymes are amazing, and the ending is best part and is my favorite. :D

Loved this one ^_^ written great and i know how that feels on one level or another, nice job

Have you ever wanted to give sunshine
to someone who lives with rain?

My favorite line. :) Beautifully written. Just one irk. Changing the "u" to "you" would make it look better. :)