Wow,u did justice to d end of d poem...so touchin..lvd it..excellent..

That was a stunning piece, somthing i would write about your is an amazing write x

Seriously it blow me off totally.it ws gudchoice of words perfect.i tink it is a perfect piece.

Seriously it blow me off totally.it ws gud choice of words perfect.i tink it is a perfect piece.

Love it trullly meaningfull

Ilove it.
it explains everything so detailed
iloveit

I love this :) :) the words are so meaningful, it is pure beauty.

Loved it (:

Lovely........<3 <3

To be honest the only flaw in this is the ryhme
scheme (constantly changing numbers of syllables). However the feeling is all there. Absolutely stellar. It's a piece of work to be jealous of :p

Love so much

That was a amazing! very touching and meaningful! i am glad he is better. my prayers are with you two.<3

=D

I liked the simplicity in the choice of words, you've done a very good job especially with the rhymes : )
well done
5/5

I love it its touching n romantic at the end :)

Wow this is so well done. I love it.

WOW!! This is a amazing, bewildering piece of work, it is touching and true to the heart. The flow is impressive, your choice of words are simple but touching all in the same. Beautiful write. Love it if you will check some more of mine out some time. :) 5/5