Wow very much insight and nicely worded and a very great poem...fantastic job i loved it and enjoyed reading it :) 5/5

My corpse entangled and infested by parasites
I now understand what gives darkness a sadistic delight
How a corpse can lay there and not to the slightest fight
How not only is my narcissism taken but so is my insight.

Live life to the fullest. to make it last
To do that don't dwell on the negatives in the past
Because that's a path that leads a long trail to only darkness
So in the end , that's a ship you don't want to embark with.

Enjoy life until its clock ticks it's last
To do that don't dwell on the past....
-i like these stanzas but
My corpse entangled and infested by parasites
I now understand what gives darkness a sadistic delight
How a corpse can lay there and not to the slightest fight
How not only is my narcissism taken but so is my insight.
-this is my favorite
because the wording is soooo good and its very very good i loved it all :) 5/5

Wow wow and wow I loved it and greatly written and worded,,,a fantastic job :) :) 5/5