I js lvd d second stanza..and d lst line..

Loved it all came together perfectly I cab relate so much to this im going through it x pure talent

Loved every single word and phrase, full of emotions, keep up the good work 5/5

I like the depth of emotions expressed in this piece.the diction was ok.imageries were well fixed.i think it was gud generally.but i suppose the flow was interupted somewhere in the middle.keep writing dear u gud

That was amazing

I don't deserve to make you wait
Why is my heart cold as ice

do what ever you want but you must know my heart belong to you

I don't deserve to make you wait
Why is my heart cold as ice

do what ever you want but you must know my heart belong to you

It is hard to have someone falling for you while you are still... On the fence so to say. You have me wondering which is better? To be the one falling in love with someone who is not... Or be the one who is not, hurting someone close to you?

Thank you for the comment :)

I liked this poem a lot. You sure know how to pull the reader in and keep them interested all the way to end

5/5

Awesome work ...keep it up..:-)

Awww. its love but its sad though. first time i seen two things in a same poem.. its just the art. and you know the art. that's why you done.. 5/5

Wow. This is art. It is amazing, and relatable in a way. But you should know if I may say, if they shed tears for you, then no one is more deserving. Even if they are undecided. Anyway magnificent piece I love it. Definatly one of my favorites