Comments : Alcohol

  • 12 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    Awesome, Understandable, and painfully real!! Great job! :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it and it speaks the truth. Nicely worded. I see nothing wrong with it other then you might want to break it up into 2 or 3 different stanzas. Other then that it is good.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Andreas Ardha

    I'm alcoholic, but I like it