Nice, the rhymes are real good. Not too short and not too long to make the reader bored. The main topic is awesome. All in all, I think this is a great poem. :D

Wonderful job! I like the fact there isn't a true form and there is a fantastic message. 5/5

The message is clear the writing was good few tweaks needed maybe but all in all a good piece

So cold yet so true. Nice write all the way. a 5/5 all the way, keep writting, i really wanna read more.

-PoetryKnight

Awsone....nicely done :):) it's a perfect combination of feelings and words... great work :):)

Thanks everyone i appreciate it(: