Wow, this is filled with such emotion,you can feel it. love this girl<3.
5/5
your such a good writer,use ur talent, dont let it go(:

This is really sad.. Hope all is well with you.

I love the choice of words in this piece and it flowed perfectly for me. Great job 5/5 keep writing :)

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Domestic violence haunts millions of people everryday :( I know what this is ike first hand...i hope whoever this poems about never sees that guy again.........because women tend to cower to their abuser.... good writig..an impact