Evrything js gud ,,,d feel ,d rhyme ...loved it ...thnx fr sharin

Awww. such a sad love poem.. this story relates to me.. i can say... this is my favorite piece of writing.. i love the style good rhyming as well.

my favorite stanza

I hope you realise, just what you have lost.
And that being so bitter, would come with a coast.
So i'll drift away silently, not making a sound.
Because if I had stayed longer, I would of drowned.

keep it up good work... :) 5/5

Wow i can totally relate, this is amazing :)

5/5

I really love this poem it is so sad and nice and i can also relate

I really love this poem it is so sad and nice and i can also relate

A nice poem,the rhym is exceptional,the wordings are great.on critism i think u've less grammatical errors,e.g 'bloods'instead of 'blood.'But all in all kudos!

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