Nice job! Its very well written.

Thank you, just came outta my heart:).

Nice u have a poem. I loved it it's really good. I'm like super proud of u keep it up it doing great :) 5/5

Its my first one EVER haha i just wrote what came outta my heart:). and thank you girly(:

Ohh i love it keep it up girly :))

I really liked this poem. The only thing I would suggest is that you break the paragraph up. maybe like this:

"I fell hard, head over heels for you.
I thought you were the one for me,
you made me believe you loved me .
But no more, no more lying to myself saying your the one.

No more hurting myself trying to open your eyes. I'm done with all the lies, and childish mind games. I'm saying no more, i'm standing up for myself. I'm pushing you out of my life and putting you behind me.

You wont ever get to me again, you wont ever find another girl like me. I would have given you the world, and you just threw me away. So No more, I'm out of your life...I've had enough and i cant do it anymore</3."

5/5

Good suggestion:)
Thank you<3