LOVE this girl! your such a good writer. you can feel and actually picture what this poem is saying. Great job(: 5/5

I loved the title and how those colors implied the feelings which you had, and also the way you described blood gushing on your wrists. Still I see this poem as more of a story and events, I think you need to have more feeling into it and show more than tell... make the reader feel like they were in your place, tell us what this reminds you of, how your heart paced, how hot, cold you were, or certain parts of your body... show, don't tell.... good luck