Comments : What You Feel 10/17/09

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth

    Wow this one is really beautiful.

    My favourite part was the lines...I'll lead you from your pain,Slowly but surely
    As you cry one less tear, I'll be your's truly...

    it sounds perfect :)

  • 12 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    I agree with Elizabeth
    absolutely beautiful
    and perfect.
    love every stanza
    also the word choice
    and the emotion behind it.
    5/5