Pretty powerful...

Keep up the good work :)

-Nia

Feel free to check out my work.

Ohw. sure i will thanks nia >:D<

Awesome...!!!! words placed properly...nice work...keep writing..:-)

Hehe :)) thanks catherin >:D< when people loves my poem i fill so proud hehe :Pso now i wan to make a poem about my self :P

Tnx

"i don't want to give a damn
if your parents hate me.
lets just end this shit.
so baby go and leave me. "

Who doesn't go through that? Telling them to leave and or letting go would be the hardest part.

I liked this poem. It was a fast and easy read. The wording was good, it got everything across. I wouldn't change a thing. :)

5/5

Hehe :P thanks :P

I can relate this poem very much...i rmember my ex with you...

Aw why ??? does you ex loves to make poems?

Aw why ??? does you ex loves to make poems?

Naaah.. i just miss her :P heheh

That was powerful but very good keep it up[:

Thank you lol