Oh wow!! This is amazing!! Fantastic job!! You are an awesome writer

It is reality..sometimes you have to choose between two choices..it's love..it's life...keep writing poems...5/5

:)wow its like u wrote my love life in middle skool, LoVeIt!(:

:)wow its like u wrote my love life in middle skool, LoVeIt!(:

Very good job :) I know when a poem is of good quality when I can feel it. & I felt this one.

The title is a real eye-catcher in my opinion. I was also pulled in my the first few verses already and I liked the rhymes. I think that because of you repeating the line "I'm torn between two" this piece had a really good flow. I like the emotions and the structure is good aswell. Overall this is a very well penned piece.

Great poem, ^_^'