Comments : Big Brother<3

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was amazing i can tell u feel alot and that he has cared for you true friends

    Miracle sent from above<3
    Optimistic when trouble is near.
    Serenity lies in his heart.
    Transcendent(:
    Amazing in every little way.
    Forever to be my big brother<3
    Awe inspiring<3

    i loved this ending so beautiful 5/5well done x

  • 12 years ago

    by Kiko

    I like the way you blended your initial lines with a final acrostic. Usually combining forms like that doesn't work well, but you really pulled it off nicely.

    Well done!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Mostafa

    I loved it Myuh !
    no one has written a poem for me before, this is fabulous really I love you so much sweet little sis <3

  • 12 years ago

    by MyaEve

    Thank you Mostafa :3
    And weird I would think someone has!
    Love you to, thank you so much for being there for me <3