Comments : Will You Be The One?

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Girl... i LOVE this<33!
    Longing for someone to heal your broken heart and to be the one who wont ever hurt you.AMAZING(:. I can feel the emotion
    love love love it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww.... such a sweet, cute poem.. that I think many people could relate to. We've all been used or felt used, and that can make us trust people harder... especially when it comes to love. It's that uncertainty of whether the person you love will make you happy or use you and hurt you.. you just never know! I liked the theme of this poem. Great job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I loved this. It really shows a girl who's been hurt and is hesitant to love again, but despite the hurt wants to fall. I think a lot of people can relate to this; I know at some point I could've too. It was very questionable about falling again, which a lot of people are. Very good, and very real. Love it.