I have to admit that the title was quite eye-catching. You had me captivated ever since the first few verses. I thought that the rhyme and flow were good too. Once you clarified that you won't write as people wish the structure of this poem changed, which underlines your message really well. I also liked the conclusion you came to. All in all your poem is very powerful and its meaning is great.

Wow! I love this! You have done a fantastic way of defying society, yet following it too (if that makes any sense) I think the word choice, and the main message were paired quite nicely. I must say if this poem is not worthy of 5/5 then what is?

Very good poem. Nicely worded. I can truly say that you got your point across and it was a good one. It is a good length and it flowed nicely all the way through.

I gave it a 5/5