Gud start..continue nw

Hope rises and Hope crashes but life goes on, great write indeed

all the best and take care

Superb dear, diz onez composed better dan d hindi version of it...

Ya we expect sumthin... But it neva happens as expectd..
Hope rises each tym it falls just lyk a child lrnin 2 stand on its feet...

Wonderful wonderful short yet meaningful poem...

Keep it up... Keep d passion of poetry widin goin...:)...;)

There is a lot of depth in this poem...Keep writing...

Love the metaphors... 5/5