Comments : Faith

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Nicely written. I liked it. The wording was good. It is a nice length. The flow was ok. I see nothing worth fixing.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Wow good work.

  • 12 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Simply amazing!!!!!!! I LOVE IT 1000/10

  • 12 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    I loved this. Such compassion, love and the sweet emotions. :)

    "Your beauty is hard to describe
    Majestically you walk,
    magnificent,
    Faith, a goddess divine" I loved this stanza. Even if your lady's name wasn't Faith, it'd still fit in perfectly. I loved how you described her here, like she is of no other woman, no beauty compared. Beautiful words. :) I hope she enjoyed this poem as much as I.
    5/5