Hello!
I like you poem, but i couldn't resist the temptation of changing it a bit. You have an awesome idea. I'm sorry. I hope you like it.

oh! Why is it that love can be so cruel?
Why is it that he is always on my thoughts?
Every time I close my eyes to picture your sweet smile
He is the one that pops into my mind.

I want you to catch me when i fall
but he takes your place instead
I want you to sing me a love song
but his voice is the one that imprints deep down in my soul.

I'm sorry if i fell in love.
I'm sorry if i loved him much.
But I realized it too late
that you are the one i truly love.

And now, I wonder all the time
Where would you be at?
And It hurts me so much to know
that you are already gone.

I blame this heart of mine
for falling for the wrong guy.
And now here I stand feeling all alone because I lost the one whom i truly love.

Don't worry,i appreciated your effort and thank you.
Well it's good.
.n_n.'

Don't worry,i appreciated your effort and thank you.
Well it's good.
.n_n.'