Short but to the point. Very true...(:. I like it<3

This is short, yes, but it has many fabulous aspects. The wording is amazing and totally fits the piece, the imagery and description are spot on, the flow is immaculate, the story/ meaning/ message of the piece is terrific. I like that the beginning is simple yet draws you in. Yet the end is strong and really ties it all together.

This is really great :) :) 5/5

Very true words. Hold on to these days. Hold on to your family. Hold on to your friends. Dont let life slip by and realize you have put so much into providing for your family that you have neglected yourself. Friends mean so much, especially when you realize you dont have any.