Love it(:. you can feel how much u love them and just want them to just love you,and let ur love grow.
5/5

This poem is quite short but the emotions are really powerful. This poem seems heartfelt and I think you penned a good piece.

This is good but I can't relate 5/5 :)

Again yes it is short, but it is very sweet. I think again you have done a great job.

Lovely,
So honest, sweet and with a sense of longing and trust.
Flowed really well, I loved this
well done
Tara-Kay