This is cute. :) The the sweet rhymes, short lines, and the fairytale-landscape. I am a bit undecided about your punctuation as it is a bit distracting, but on the other hand, if you take it away, things will read awkward. Hmm. Perhaps take each stanza's second and fourth line's capital letter away? So it eyes less heavy.

Thank you, Cynnie. And ah, I see. I will(:

Well done My ! : 3
I loved the flow of the poem and I keep reading it over and over !
5/5

Thank you much, love<3

Great imagery. I liked how smoothly it read.