Lift up your hands to God

The only things you can do

when you feel alone

and when emptiness caught

your body and soul.

--I love the way you begin this part...this part tells that if you're not able to bear the things that troubled you..you should left it up to our beloved God and He will never leave you alone...

Look at the sky above

and someday behind those

heavy gray clouds the sun

is still shining

where the second chance

of life awaits.

--like this part too. Yeah, I also believe that from your sacrifices there will always be success. Well-penned

Remember that every circumstance

there's a reason behind

And when fate calls

No matter how you keep

yourself away from it

will always be the road

you must have to follow because

it was the said destiny

which was God has provided for you.

--Wow. This is my favorite part. I love the way you worded it. Amazing.

Eventhough you'll try to seperate yourself

and wanted to go in other place

You can only dream of it when your fate

never allow you to reach your purposes

Or even you'll bend your knees and pray

what you desired things will never come

in your way if it is not your luck...

--I love your ending too. You know this kind of poem I longing to read because it has content of inspirational words. I love positive words so I gonna love this poem too. I will put it in my favorite poem. Keep writing:)
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