Wow this is really really good I so relate :) 5/5

A very gentle and innocent poem. I remember feeling this way once. I encourage you to keep growing as a writer.

p.s. Thank you for reading and commenting on many of my poems, it's greatly appreciated! It's wonderful to have complete strangers from around the world feel a connection with your words. It makes the world seems a little brighter, no? :)

- mandy 5/5

Another good one, very true feelings

Very sweet and innocent! i loved it
it makes me want to start writing love poetry again

very good!
5/5