Sad piece. I enjoyed the metaphors that you use.
But it's ok. How do we expect someone to know us if we don't say what is wrong with us? What is bothering us? What is hurting us? So if you want someone to know you. Instead of locking your feelings you should just open them up to the one that you choose.

Nice piece. I can feel the emotions.

This is a brilliant piece. I love the how it is written. i know the feeling.