Comments : A Cold Breeze

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow.... very goood i got scared just reading it
    A cold breeze rushes past me,
    sending chills down my spine,
    feeling a presence,
    thinking that I'm alone,
    but feeling someone watching me,
    knowing that someone else is here with me.

    i felt chills just reading it .... loved it girl :) :) :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you Girly(: Love you.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    That is amazin the image you set here is astounding. ... i loved the story. .. i loved the wording i loved it all amazing job x

  • 12 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Omg!!! i felt every word...its mystery,darkness,,soo goodd...one of your best poems yet!!!!
    100/100

    cuz 5 is too little to describe it
    LOVED iT!!

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you girl(:
    Loveeeee you <3