Comments : Something

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is really good I loved it...
    At this poems end
    Truth told to a friend
    I am half way through
    Whats to come is still new
    This is most favorite or reaching out to me but all in all I loved it <3 :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Great Write :)
    The flow was really good and I like the selection of words you used to create this great piece!
    I love the last line because it is a deep reflection of reality.. we always find everything as new whether we like it or dislike it is up to us and our perception of the world :)
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Really nice rhyme and fantastic flow. A message of life embedded in this good write.
    I love the last few lines it brought it all together..facing the unknown ..it's an adventure isn't it

    Connie