Very good poem. Very full of emotions. It was nicely worded for the most part, it was a little repetitive. It is a good length and it flowed good from beginning to end. other then maybe getting rid of some of the repetitiveness I see nothing else that needs to be fixed.

I gave it a 5/5

Do you remember our first kiss,
the first time we said I love you,
the way I would grab your face saying I'm yours forever,
saying nothing could change the way I felt,
I meant every single word,
but obviously you didn't,
were out of eachothers lives,
no longer together.

This is my favorite and I can relate :)
Maybe not dead but lost :) love u girl :) :) 5/5

I get where you're coming from with the poem, but seems like a lot of cliches sorta strung together. nice flow though.