Love this Poem girl. You can feel how hurt you are, it flowed so good.

The cigarettes you light,
One after another,
Won't help you forget her.
And the way that you love her.

I loved this stanza,saying no matter what he doesnt she'll always be on his mind. Great job girl. <3 Loved it.
5/5

This is really a sad poem.... but i love it .. it's so heart touching, you have shown ur pain in such a good way.. i love this..
The cigarettes you light,
One after another,
Won't help you forget her.
And the way that you love her.

I love this Stanza too.. it is a nice work.. :) 5/5