hi
nice poem I like it a lot
you really know how to use words right =)

I gave you a 5

please check out my poems
"Misery" "LONELY GIRL" "Wonderful again" and "To me you're special" and comment and rate it would mean a lot to me

hugs and kisses

great job, agree with Peter, learn fast!! gonna have to try one of these!!! wonderful..love the premis, I love music too!!! (who doesnt I guess!??!) Mich :)

Great job,Trincy.... The triolet is also on my list of forms I'd like to accomplish! :o)