Dekhne se sapne suchh kahaa hote hain???
HUm insaan unhe suchh karne k liye.. Sapnon k dahleej tak jaate hain aur dil k darwaaze pe dastak diye bagair khaali haath waapiz laut jaate hain...:)

Nyc poem... I think u hav 2 restructure d poem... Not necessary, just a suggestion..n werz d english version of it? Gudd one

Very soothing, nicely written poem indeed.

all the best and take care

What can I say? This poem is so difficult to understand since I don't know this language other than nahi=no.

But the structure of each stanzas caught my attention. I hope to see the English version.

Well

Thank for your comment.

I am bad in english I love writing but my english is not good i rearly upload here.

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