Comments : Adhore Sapne

  • 8 years ago

    by Prasad B

    Dekhne se sapne suchh kahaa hote hain???
    HUm insaan unhe suchh karne k liye.. Sapnon k dahleej tak jaate hain aur dil k darwaaze pe dastak diye bagair khaali haath waapiz laut jaate hain...:)

    Nyc poem... I think u hav 2 restructure d poem... Not necessary, just a suggestion..n werz d english version of it? Gudd one

  • 8 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Very soothing, nicely written poem indeed.

    all the best and take care

  • 8 years ago

    by L

    What can I say? This poem is so difficult to understand since I don't know this language other than nahi=no.

    But the structure of each stanzas caught my attention. I hope to see the English version.

  • 8 years ago

    by I am

    Well

    Thank for your comment.

    I am bad in english I love writing but my english is not good i rearly upload here.

  • 6 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    YOUR WORDS ARE YOUR HEART.
    "na poore na adhoore mere sapne"----24 carat gold line.

    • 6 years ago

      by I am

      Thanx

    • 6 years ago

      by I am

      Thanx yaar