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by Prasad B
Dekhne se sapne suchh kahaa hote hain???
HUm insaan unhe suchh karne k liye.. Sapnon k dahleej tak jaate hain aur dil k darwaaze pe dastak diye bagair khaali haath waapiz laut jaate hain...:)
Nyc poem... I think u hav 2 restructure d poem... Not necessary, just a suggestion..n werz d english version of it? Gudd one
by End Of Eternity
Very soothing, nicely written poem indeed.
all the best and take care
What can I say? This poem is so difficult to understand since I don't know this language other than nahi=no.
But the structure of each stanzas caught my attention. I hope to see the English version.
by I am
Well Thank for your comment.
I am bad in english I love writing but my english is not good i rearly upload here.
by Sidh Swabhav
YOUR WORDS ARE YOUR HEART.
"na poore na adhoore mere sapne"----24 carat gold line.