Wow... Love this<3.
It captures your attention wanting to read more and not want it to end. I love how u described the eyes and the scenery! you can picture it so vividly :)
Once again, another amazing poem from you :)
5/5

Like a novel.. theres a crave for more. i love it and it reminds me of my favorite author!

This piece is wonderful. your flow is great, your choice of words adds strength to the piece. You penned pure story captivated by all the emotion. Description tends to be a weakness for a lot of people, but not for you. Terrific piece