This is one of my all time favorites because it is just so stinking funny. I loved so many lines in this poem, so needless to say I loved the whole thing. I love the line "you lifeless drone". lol. Very funny. :)

I liked this alot ^_^ very fun poem, nice

Great work, very smooth and entertaining, enjoyed it!

Very good

Thought this was a funny poem. Liked the part: Miss me when eating frozen dinners.
Miss me when your hair gets thinner." Thought that was funny. Nice write. :)

Usually I'm not that much into repetition, but I actually liked this. You managed to keep me interested and I think that this poem flows really well.

I LOVE THIS POEM!!♥