Comments : Let Me Be(COLLAB)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I soooo relate:
    Then tell me why did you make me fall for you,
    Then send me spiraling down a black hole
    To a place where all I feel is nerve racking pain.

    Countless signs my heartbreak shows,
    Existing deprived of purpose,
    Loss of conscious,
    Questioning if I'll ever love again,
    Please let me be and please set me free.
    -This pome is soooo good i love it and everything is perfect :) 5/5
    My favorite stanzas:
    You've hurt me more then you know,
    You set my soul on fire,
    Shattered my heart like it was a mere piece of trash,
    Laughed in my face as tears came crashing down,
    And now you're back trying to repair my damaged Heart.

    No longer concerned about life,
    death is the only thing I crave.

    Let me move on from this heart break,
    For you continue to push me to the brink of death,
    I keep hearing you say I love you,
    I'm so sorry for hurting you,
    Then tell me why did you make me fall for you,
    Then send me spiraling down a black hole
    To a place where all I feel is nerve racking pain.

    I pretty much loved absolutely everything :) :)