This is really good i loved it :) 5/5
My favorite stanza:
Starts off with,
Please don't be angry with me,
I never meant to hurt anybody this way,
I felt alone in this world,
With no body to turn to,
I was grasping on for dear life,
Trying to better myself,
Trying to live for you guys,
When all along I was better off dead.

That was awesome i couldnt tell who wroite what u gel'd together so perfectly very good write

Amazing written by the both of you.
5/5