Comments : The days seem dim...

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awwww Matt this poem really touched me... I felt every emotion you expressed, and I must say it's a relatable poem. I loved the last stanza, it gave me chills... best line ever "Butterflies fill the evening air" beautiful words!!! Great job my friend =)

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow Matthew!(:

    i LOVE this poem. Pure emotion runs through, you can feel the intensity of your love & how much you wish you were with her. I can relate to this-but with a guy of course lol-

    People tell me that it will get easy
    But my heart just cannot let go
    I want so badly to turn around
    Oh how I love you so

    I know how this feels, everybody telling you move on you need to, but ur heart wont let you bcuz u love them so dearly.

    My favorite poem of yours:)
    10/10 <3