Comments : Finally got it right...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Love it<3
    This made me think about my ex & how i thought i could never live without him,but then i realized i was always better offwith out him :).

    So thank you for nothing
    You were never a part of me
    Thank you for helping realize
    That without you, I'm finally happy!

    Love this stanza...finally realizing she never deserved you & that you actually are happier without her in your life.

    Nothing about this poem i would change. The love you had for her shown through, but then also all the pain she caused you was very vivid. Amazing Job(:
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww wow Matt I love it!! This poem really touched me... I loved the first stanza, how you start by saying you still think about this person and wonder about her, but how you make a self-realization throughout the poem and become stronger... Loved the ending stanza, I think it was really strong and completed the idea of the poem. Great job!! =)