My mind is clear,
as the breeze flows around my body,
giving me the slightest chill,
picking up a fragile sand dollar,
taking me back to the days as a little girl,
walking the beach with my mom,
trying to find the perfect one

my fav ... this was amazing i loved the idea and i somtimes stand on the beach feeling the breeze thinking of the times of the past amazing hol .... i new you would be good at everything not just sad :D 5/5

I really like the imagery of this poem, you did a really good job describing this 5/5

I feel at peace for once in my life.
- this is my favorite out of favorite part :)
the poem was emotional i felt happy and sad at the same time reading it. great poem girl... i love the ocean and this poem says a lot i love it :) great job :) :) 5/5

A calming affect is how this piece feels. Done very well with a nice flow and content. The imagery was vivid, I'm ready to go to the beach:-)

Connie

This poem is so good. i was in beach side few months ago. i should have written this poem. but you wrote it. i really liked and enjoyed this poem. this poem really makes me feel happy. and i felt i was in beach once again. everything is so clear.
i like when u said about blue sky. its good. i have nominated this poem for a weekly contest. good luck :)