The emotions in this poem are strong and touching, I think it was a good idea to keep the content of the last sentence till the poem ends, that way the reader is captivaed throughout the poem. The rhymes don't seem forced which I rarely see and I think you penned a good poem here.

I strongly empathize with you!!
This poem shows the true desperation and turmoil faced during these times in our lives!!!! I have felt the same to many times and acted out some regretful actions. time is the only thing that will heal!! Great poem. God Bless!

I really Like this poem alot :) i give it 5/5 :) amazing job

This is deep and good,sad but i loved it and i enjoyed reading it it's a great poem :) :) absolutely fantastic and it's worded so well :) :) 5/5