Comments : Lonely tears...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

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    You helped me understand love
    The opposite meaning of it
    Leaving my heart abandoned
    In a deep, heartless pit

    I know how this feels exactly.
    Amazing Job, you can word ur emotion so perfectly & flawlessly :)
    Love it!!
    10/10:)

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww.. this poem made me feel saadd! But you've expressed your emotions deeply.. It started out sweet and then changed completely, as the anger started to show but the last stanza was sad... I loved the last two lines "There are no words to describe
    The lonely tears on my pillow"

    It reminded of the old song "tears on my pillow" because of your last line! Well done my friend!

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I agree with both of the people above. Amazing job...