This is really emotional:) I love it ofc5/5:)

This poem is sooooo good and sooooo sad i think im gonna cry... it hit my heart and riped it out as if it were my own feelings and well it was great and everything is pefect on this poem :) :)

well i thought about it and i don't have a favorite part because i love love love it all :) :) 5/5

All of it is amazing

All of it is really touching. Goodjob :)

It's not your fault I'm crying
so don't you think that at all
don't feel guilty for something you didn't do
just hug me and don't let me fall

my favorite :)

Wow :)
I Love this poem.
You can picture everything so perfectly in your mind & feel the pain thats pouring through as tears run down your face.
Amazing:)
5/5

I love your poem, very well written 5/5

Oh wow... this is so sad. You had me captivated from the start, I'd just recommend you to chose a different title because this one tells too much. This poem sets a nice scenery that the reader is able to imagine and I like the emotions because they're so heartfelt and everybody can relate to them.