Comments : When You Sleep

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    This poem may be short, but it's obvious that this is a heartfelt poem, that is filled with emotions. The emotions are quite strong though I'm sure you could add to it still. It flows well even though the verses seem quite long and I like that the speaker directed this to the person she's thinking off.
    I'm sorry if you feel this way though.