Hello,

you got a good one there!
this line got me thinking of what you were trying to say:

"I feeling deep down is unexplainable"

I feeling deep? or I feel deep? or A feeling deep?

just thought i should let you know!
the flow was very good, and i was enjoying it, until i got towards the ending of the poem!

it was a little bumpy!
but i could see you tried to get it back on track!

keep it up!
cheers
Robie Lincer