Comments : Never ending delusions
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14 years ago
Dark and enjoyable.
You have made your mark in the society of dark poets lol
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14 years agoby L
This awesome.. The wisdom that we are seeking lies ahead of us.. Pretty good. I enjoy it.
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14 years ago
Thank u friend..glad u liked it
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14 years ago
Appericiated !!
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13 years ago
by Robert
There was a lot of great description here but no focal point for be centered it too. I kinda left me scratching my head. Wondering what were you try to tell me. Did you have a point to this poem? Plot121
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13 years ago
"there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma
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13 years ago
"there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma
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13 years ago
"there is a focal point but hidden", basically what i wrote here is about alcoholism,repentance and karma
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12 years ago
Wow, amazing work. 5/5
