Comments : The Goodbyes

  • 14 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    With fires quell, ashes remain
    fertile the soil, so love may regain.

    At the time, with affections relay
    assured not, of passions decay.
    - this is my favorite part of poem but the entire thing was great and fantastic :) I absolutely love love loved it :) :) 5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by Georgia

    Wow this is beautiful !!
    touching and emotional 5/5 !!