Comments : Let's Do This Again

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    This poem is so cute :)
    I can see the poem actually happening, realizing they made the wrong decision.

    Content, but nevertheless, intense
    I guess see you again
    Reminded me how much I didn't let go
    So now you know
    Bumping into me made you realize
    That your decision may have not been wise
    You feeling wounded is a surprise

    love this stanza, finally him seeing what happened & what his true feelings are <3

    Great job, it flowed so well & you could feel the emotion.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Thanks holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Thanks holly