Comments : Life has faded...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    I have a hole in my chest
    Where there once was a heart
    My head that once thought about you
    Now, you are no longer a part

    Love that stanza, shows the emptiness you felt when you lost her.

    I love this poem, you're simply brilliant when it comes to writing.:)
    Everything you feel just pours through & you wanna read more and more.
    Love this<3
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Lolz :D holly even before i had a look to your comment i copied this stanza.....

    I have a hole in my chest
    Where there once was a heart
    My head that once thought about you
    Now, you are no longer a part

    must say dear awesome work done :)
    keep up